Britney Hogue

somewhere but no where/ Oklahoma
Britney Hogue
somewhere but no where/ Oklahoma
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Lovers Crystal Stream

Rating: 4.9
The warming sunshine on my back
And a light breeze blowing my gold hair
I sit on a bridge over a cool crystal stream
My feet explore the shiny rocks below
His protecting arms around me tight
To keep all harm from finding me here

He leans over and kiss me softly
As I watch and listen to the scene unfold
Upon a lush tree near the sparkling waters edge
A little sparrow chirps its enlightening song
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You have selected glorious words to write a simply beautiful poem. I was entranced how many wonderful images you captured and it was fuzzy and warm. So very well done! 10 Karin Anderson
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Eyan Desir 03 April 2009
Nice poem but sooo long... A little shorter please
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Shekhar Joshi 03 April 2009
The poem has wonderful imagery A beautiful and warming poem. Excellent work
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Indira Babbellapati 27 March 2009
a delightful read! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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Pablo Cruise 27 March 2009
Nice developement of the imagery, Britney.
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Mark R Slaughter 27 March 2009
Nice smooth flowing poem Britney. Nice write. Mark
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 26 March 2009
Beautiful poem. Wonderful imagery. Words flow like stream. Keep writing.......10/10. Best Wishes Naseer
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Terry Finch 26 March 2009
Very nicely done Britney and the imagery took me back a few years. You wove a good story with your poem and placed the reader right there. I noticed a couple typos in S2 - L1 & L4. I'll let you catch them. Nice work young lady. T.L.
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Eyan Desir 26 March 2009
Interestin write dear............................
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Greenwolfe 1962 26 March 2009
Pure romanticism. I think this is one of the most complete and vivid descriptive writings I have ever read in this context. There are a lot of people who might try to write something like this, but they would certainly fail to include all that you did. Just wonderful. GW62
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