***luminous Glow*** Poem by Saane Pahulu

***luminous Glow***

Rating: 4.5


stars swimming in the midst of the ocean
laughing and dancing out in the open
cheeky and mysterious they maybe
with my dreams hidden within them.
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they blind me with their beauty
hypnotic and graceful
i wish upon a star.
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they laugh and twirl around your luminous glow
twinkling bright but not as bright as you, my dear
for you are my guide, my friend and my lover
forever as one though we are apart.
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catch my kisses as they soar up to you
know that my love belongs to you
i'll wait hear till the twilight
just to see my baby waiting in the sky.
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my longing to join you
so strong in my heart
wait for me darling
i'm on my way to you.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jake Samuelson 30 January 2010

You have something going for you here.. definately keep it up

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Nathan Barkley 08 November 2009

That was beautiful. Good job

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Tamara - Hanaring 17 September 2009

beautiful write with beautiful images..10+++

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Jean Dament 15 September 2009

I really enjoyed your love poem with it's lovely imagery. Thanks for sharing.

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Jean Dament 15 September 2009

I really enjoyed your love poem with it's lovely imagery. Thanks for sharing.

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