Lying In Bed Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Lying In Bed

Rating: 4.9


She was lying in bed
Tubes around and artificially fed
Speechless as if gripped with cold
Calm but determined and looked bold

Was it pain or anger?
Unhappiness or hunger?
Disease, fatigue or discomfort
needed solace and strong support

I looked tired and pale
what could I do for her to console?
I was utterly helpless
Efforts made were more but result was less

Memory took me back several years
She whispered gently and I could hear
She slept on bed without fear
Happiness on face without a tear

She was gorgeous with the entire smile
I was simply mesmerized for a while
I was ducking to show her warm love
I starred at her as lover dove

All thoughts came to an abrupt halt
As if somebody was rubbing salt
Wounds were aggravating with deep pain
Her sickness was the worry main

She always smiled and prayed Lords
Stood at door with welcoming words
She never complained or expressed regret
Eager to compromise and ready to forget,

Such a noble soul was undergoing pain
All my efforts were proving in vain
Will she recover and be talking again?
Smile with consciousness without pain

Let my years be added to her life
Lived up to expectation as good wife
Life was difficult to walk on edge of knife
she acted wise even when situation was not rife

One has to part when time has run out
Victory may sometimes result into rout
All we can do is to pray and bow to almighty
Shower with blessings to come out of pity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suresh Vakil 07 August 2009

very pathetic conditionfor patient....10

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Vinod Karmakar 09 August 2009

w2e can not look at that time the condition....10

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Shilpa Maheswari 10 August 2009

we can do nothing at that time....10

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Santoksingh Jadeja 10 August 2009

unbearable constion for the patients....10

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Ratna Patel 11 August 2009

it is very pathetic and sad scene....10

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Twinkle Vohra 12 October 2009

She was lying in bed Tubes around and artificially fed, Speechless and cold, Determined and bold

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Lalvani Rekha 16 September 2009

She was lying in bed Tubes around and artificially fed, Speechless and cold, Determined and.........

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Sulochna Pandit 14 September 2009

She was lying in bed Tubes around and artificially fed, Speechless and cold, Determined and bold

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Milica Franchi De Luri 12 September 2009

Sad poem about your wife.Her being in that state must have made feel you powerless. My mother was in exactly same condition before she past away and it was very heard for me to see her like that.........

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Raju Rajput 16 August 2009

feel so sad abt her....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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