M.I.S.S Y.O.U... Poem by hazem al jaber

M.I.S.S Y.O.U...

Rating: 3.9


M.I.S.S Y.O.U...








M: My lovely sweetheart...
I: I loved this world because of you...
S: Saw your pretty face into my dream before i met...
S: Sadness lost its way after it realized about our love...

Y: You are everyting to me, my world and the air that i need...
O: Our life is just a good enough for us, thankful i am to this world...
U: You are the lucky one into my world as i am too, because we destined one to the other...



Miss you...



LOVE YOU!



by: hazem02@yahoo.com

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naidz Ladia 04 April 2009

nice piece.....the appearance is fine..and the thought is ok.. naizz

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Maria Barbara Korynt 04 April 2009

Sweet love confidences, warm love - what is needed more? Longing is also.I read your interesting poem with pleasure. Greetings for you :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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Merna Ibrahim 04 April 2009

Sweet poem, interesting to read too.........well written Merna

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Nangula Immanuel 04 April 2009

Wow! this is really fun poem. its real good as well. can't wait to read more of your poems!

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Sid John Gardner. 04 April 2009

Acrostic poems are one of my favourite forms of writing.Can be fun too.Like this one very much Hazem. Sid

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