Afraid About You... Poem by hazem al jaber

Afraid About You...

Rating: 2.8


busy to you..
in thinking of you...
and try to escape in thinking of you..
to find myself falling in my dream with you...
inside my heart, you are..
in my eyes...
in my soul too..
escape from you..
and then found you inside me...

afraid about you, from myself...
afraid from all people,
to see you in my eyes, when i think of you...
afraid to see you in my smile..
and in my lips too..
always try to close my eyes,
to hide you in my eyes,
so no one can see you...
but they can see you in my lips...

afraid from my loving to you..
afraid that my beat heart, become so high..
and over than my mind`s whispers..
so, escape from you, in my heart..
to found you in my mind...

every thing will disappear..
and become nothing more important..
in front of thinking about you..
and the only you, whom still in my mind..
and in any idea in my thought..
or in any look in my eyes..
even every smile in my face, you are..
and you only, whom still inside me..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
joe Jo 31 May 2006

It is awsome I love how you write so sweet and kind but yet a little touchey and a evil more mean side is showen! !

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Emma Abbley 06 June 2006

i really do like your poems hazem. thank you 4 my email. i love the way u describe your feelings. i really can connect with you. you should check out my ones and please dont hesitate to comment on them. i would really like to know what a talented poet like yourself thinks of them. emma abbley xxxxx

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Angelica Abington 07 June 2006

Very well put, I really like the way you write..Keep it up..

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Oliver Roberts 29 September 2006

Hazem, it's great when you discover a poet who writes the things you like to read - you do that for me. These lines took my breath away: afraid to see you in my smile.. and in my lips too.. always try to close my eyes, to hide you in my eyes, so no one can see you... but they can see you in my lips...

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Lelani Faifai 13 July 2007

Thoughts of others seem to plague our minds....But i guess master pieces are inspired when that happens

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When we are in love, we should be ready to face any circumtances. Lovely piece so romantic. best regards, jdh

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Danny H 15 August 2009

Your poems are so precious and beautiful Is it your wife you write about, girlfriend, crush? WHO! im gonna go crazy xD

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Obed Souza 20 July 2009

Love is so precious... afraid of what? if we love love feeds us with everything we need... Nice doing!

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Tina Mathurin 02 June 2009

Hazem. It's the honesty & torment of being in love, she's a lucky woman. Tina

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Anjali Sinha 18 October 2008

afraid afraid afraid! ! ! ! do not be afraid just look into those 'eyes' regards anju

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