Maa (Mother) Poem by Debendra Majhi

Maa (Mother)

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She is nonagenarian now,
Her heart bits slow.
Lungs pump reluctantly,
Cranial bones groan in pain,
Joints in inertia row.

Doctors say that the Head
Has burdened much load.
The Heart has given
Too much Love,
And excessive Care,
Lungs consumed charcoal,
Has inhaled volumes of smoke.
(while cooking meals)

Her children are Elites now,
Have approaches and remedies.

But they are not seen at all,
Mother longs to live alone.
Along the memories of those days,
With her then children.

Maa (Mother)
Thursday, January 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: deception
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rashmita Majhi. 19 August 2019

Sad poem feelings are infused in it.thanks for sharing this fabulous poem with us

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Rashmita majhi 19 August 2019

Sad poem, feelings are infused in it.thanks for sharing this fabulous poem with us

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 October 2018

Mother longs to live alone. Along the memories of those days, With her then children.. deep desire to live with the children for whom she gave her life......... a very fine poem dear poet. tony

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Debendra Majhi 19 October 2018

thank you dear Dr.Tony that you liked the poem.

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Chinedu Dike 03 February 2018

A beautiful rhetorical piece of poetry. Deep feelings expressed with wonderful command of the language. Thanks for sharing Debendra.

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Debendra Majhi 04 February 2018

thank you dear friend Chinedu for understanding the feelings of a mother in her old age and appreciating the depiction of intensity of that feeling.

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Bharati Nayak 21 January 2018

Doctors say that the Head Has burdened much load. The Heart has given Too much Love, And excessive Care, Lungs consumed charcoal, Has inhaled volumes of smoke. (while cooking meals) - - - - - - -It is an irony that children forget how their mother sacrificed her whole life for their sake. Memories of bygone days are her only companions at the last stage of life.

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