Sunday, October 5, 2008

Magic Faraway Tree (For Under 10's & The Like) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dressed in a cloak of bronze, brown bark
The forest king calls through song of a lark
A secret door beckons enter this way through
To a faraway land, where dreams come true
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Tia Maria
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Fiona Davidson 27 May 2009

This a wonderful write Tia...maybe we will see more lke this? ...Fi 10+++

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Tom Balch 05 October 2008

See you have branched off in another direction, a really lovely piece.10/10 Tom

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Sathyanarayana M V S 05 October 2008

Soooo beautiful. Are there poets who can write like this? ! ! !

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Indira Renganathan 05 October 2008

And your poem too.. full of magic all readers embrace...nice verses

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