*make Me Yours* Poem by shiza khan

*make Me Yours*

Rating: 2.9

if i am a mystery,
u can solve me,
only with ur trust,
you can own me.
i may be a butterfly,
u can catch me,
only with ur smile,
u can hold me.
i maybe a redrose,
u can pluck me,
only with ur tenderness,
u can smell me.
i maybe a dark chocolate,
u can tempt me,
only with ur passion,
u can touch me.
i maybe ur fantasy,
u can dream me,
only with ur sincerity,
u can make me ur reality.

Ershad Mazumder 02 September 2008

This one i liked. Give new dimension to your thought.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 02 September 2008

well written indeed..............10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 24 April 2008

delicious piece..........

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u can make me ur reality Awesome lil girl you have done us proud rehan

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shel cope 08 March 2008

I agree with thai....capturing an important truth not in a sophisticated way, but all the more charming for it shiza.

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Omar Ali Sabar 08 December 2008

wow wow shiza... really beautilful. whoever it is for is very lucky..10/10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 October 2008

Nice n cute writes......hi shiza.....wishin the best you'd get! !

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Emily Oldham 20 September 2008

nice metaphors, it is unique. well done

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Aijaz Asif 19 September 2008

this poem is sure different, nice writing

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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 September 2008

A beautiful touchy and lovely poem. Love it and added 10 to it.

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