Make The Static Go Away Poem by Thomas Case

Make The Static Go Away

Rating: 4.3


Make the static go away,
the dead-dog depression;
the fleas tip-toeing across
my brain.
Hate locks the
door to the heart,
and puts the
soul in a cage.
The rage consumes,
like a west coast fire.

Make the static go
away,
the electric anxiety;
the butterflies swimming in
my blood.
Love is a fantasy,
a fairy tale for children.
Devotion imprisons
the mind and
subdues the heart.

Give me sweet
apathy, beautiful
sedation, let me
float in bliss;
not tethered by emotion.
Let me get lost, deep
in the core of the orchid,
and sail aimless,
in the vast chasm
of the sea.
Give me radical
lethargy.

Friday, November 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: anxiety,depression,pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tony Kavuoti 27 November 2015

You described profound pain and despair so eloquently. Heartfelt and brilliant

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Nosheen Irfan 27 November 2015

Fleas tip-toeing across my brain..butterflies swimming in my blood. That's original. These expressions convey a sense of anxiety and depression quite well. Liked.

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Thomas Case

Thomas Case

Oxnard, California
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