Make Water Flow. Poem by Geoff Warden

Make Water Flow.

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How, in such moment of time,
Doth thou come unto me,
Delivering such colours radiance,
Liken unto the falls of Niagara,
Filling voids of empathic rooms.

How, in such moment of space,
Doth thou reach the scope,
Of the depth of my pardon,
Liken unto birds paradise,
Giving voice unto melting need.

How, in such movement of spirit,
Doth thy empathic touch,
Deliver me unto heighten joy,
Felt only at the pinpoint second,
Emotions quake has release.

Only Thou could bring such eclipse.....

Only thou could make water flow.......

GJW- 26/12/06

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 15 May 2007

Wow, this blew my socks off. It is perhaps the most spiritual poem I have ever read about this subject. Very wonderfully crafted.

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Diane Violet 26 December 2006

Wow, I'll say but somehow seems to harsh or loud for this quietly flowing piece of outspoken love. Beautiful Geoff............................Diane

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 26 December 2006

Metaphoric mind at work, here Sir G...You have constructed this work quite well 1 ~f.j.r.~

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Patricia Gale 26 December 2006

Beautful Geoff, simply and utterly beautiful....

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