Monday, July 8, 2013

Making A Way To History! Comments

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Historical monuments
Stood remarkably well with proud
Making headway to
Wonders of world
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 August 2018

Yesterday was a forest here. In a couple of week forest disappeared Manual skill supersede New technology, latest implements Blink of eye, a beautiful tower stood. And within couple of year tower collapsed Thousands lay dead under it No value for anything today! Collapse of building was a history Now its a common sight! ..........so touching and true. A brilliant poem nicely executed.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 April 2017

No value for anything today! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Valsa George 03 September 2016

When technology, money and human ingenuity are combined, in no time monuments and towering buildings are erected! But there is no guarantee for their strength or durability...! In the quest for making undue profits, inferior quality materials are used. Soon we hear of the collapse of buildings here and there..! Such tragedies are more frequent in modern times! Geetha, you have dealt with a serious issue.... the over riding greed of man leads to tragedies, which could have been averted, if man had been a little more prudent!

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Akhtar Jawad 06 August 2016

Collapse of building was a history Now its a common sight! A poet is great if he can amaze his readers with the bitterness of truth, and so is Geetha Jayakumar.

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