some foolish, some wise
and some have gone unjustified
some heard, many ignored
so most are given to the lord
A poignant creation set aside for sober reflection. Beautiful poem written with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing.
acceptance and ignorance hidden and secrecy form of unstable human mind!
Not sure you are receiving my comments, but am back to reading your work again. Think you would be better at it if you did not box yourself in, but maybe you like it. Me never. No chinooks here to hold us back.
Don't really get it all as as there are leaps of thought and understanding throughout your corpus. Maybe you can explain a little if not, not.
Anyway, I find your laconic, terse verse of high interest. I once was religious, Roman Catholic, but have been an athiesr since age about 17, some, quite a few years ago.
I have a lot more to say, about this and other poems, so tried to message you a minute or so ago, but can't use message function fir some reason.
Read many of your poems tonight including this one, hermetic and mystical in nature, mystical ascsome of my poems have been described by others.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Such a fine poem, ACM👍👍👍