Marriage is a graveyard
where love can vainly die
If hard work and commitment
are sold for lusts and lies
Courtship is a car crash
if your looking for shortcuts
and children are the nails
that keep the coffin shut
Love and trust must always be kept alive in a marriage or else it can be a graveyard.Unique comparison and beautifully expounded.. Enjoyed reading
Oh it can be bliss! provided both parties are committed to the same endeavors and persuits and are not selfish. Problem is people run into marriage looking for the good times and check out for the bad
Your words are so very true. The drive of this is not so easy...wise decisions make it run smoothly. we need to nurture it not just fetch it. An insightful poem. Thank-you.
Love and marriage must always be nurtured by both parties. A powerful and insightful write with great images. Liked the title; a striking line.Top Marks! ! ! !
A profound poem so very true.The sanctity of marriage is always compromised with lies and lusts.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Such a brilliant poem dressed in a fantastic title... liked your first stanza the most. A prudent and perceptive composition.