Mature Understanding.... Poem by Varsha M

Mature Understanding....

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Bound to time
Chained in space
Probably stable element
I the unstable stand aghast
Yet unclear amidst the clear
How to bridge this gap linear
Answer's the transcendence
That wins our life
Andfor generations, preserve
Even though in death, our body, elope
Soul remains free all the time
Free in the free space.
Exploring all aspects in time land
Just pleasure and pleasure abound.

Mature Understanding....
Sunday, October 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: peace,space,time,tranquility ,transcendent
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by Mahtab Bangalee poem elderly old and Deluke M Freedom and me poet yeps poet re- wireyourmind
A little understanding of time and space makes massive change that totally makes life different. But fathoming this needs your patience and a helping friend to meter the journey till the end.
A typical Shakespearean sonnet so I remove second last line 'Where there is no fear and no terror.' But the essence of the line is eminent and I don't wish to remove it. So a twist to the original sonnet style.
Photo courtesy Shannon Hope on unsplash. Picture of Lisboe, Portugal.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evelyn Judy Buehler 20 November 2020

The triumph of the soul is beautifully described in this wonderful poem. It's in my List.

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Terry Craddock 04 October 2020

'Bound to time Chained in space Probably stable element I the unstable stand aghast' loved these lines, I can get lost in them...

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