Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 415,084 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Meeting And Eating - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Jack, Jill, and Mill were to attend a meeting
They set out their journey after heavy eating
The meeting was about to hold on sixth floor-seating
In the meanwhile it took place the electric power cutting
The lift became useless they were in thinking
They tried on feet but did fail for heavy eating
They dribbled for fudge and lunch sweet testing.

Topic(s) of this poem: food, human condition, meeting

Form: Chance Operations


Poet's Notes about The Poem

It is poem in the form Chance Operation.

Comments about Meeting And Eating by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Pushpendra Patel (2/27/2019 5:18:00 PM)

    This is interesting comparison study. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet. (Report)Reply

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (12/26/2016 11:24:00 PM)

    Very interesting and quite humorous. The narrative is also in line with Jack & Jill spirit and evokes laughter. Thanks for sharing a different kind of poem adorable by children and grown ups alike. (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (11/26/2016 7:35:00 AM)

    Humanity. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report)Reply

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  • Muzahidul RezaMuzahidul Reza (11/26/2016 6:55:00 AM)

    Jack, Jill, and Mill were to attend a meeting
    They set out their journey after heavy eating

    excellent written,10
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 26, 2016

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 23, 2020


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