Meeting And Eating Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Meeting And Eating

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Jack, Jill, and Mill were to attend a meeting
They set out their journey after heavy eating
The meeting was about to hold on sixth floor-seating
In the meanwhile it took place the electric power cutting
The lift became useless they were in thinking
They tried on feet but did fail for heavy eating
They dribbled for fudge and lunch sweet testing.

Saturday, November 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: food,human condition,meeting
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It is poem in the form Chance Operation.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pushpendra Patel 27 February 2019

This is interesting comparison study. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.

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Rajnish Manga 26 December 2016

Very interesting and quite humorous. The narrative is also in line with Jack & Jill spirit and evokes laughter. Thanks for sharing a different kind of poem adorable by children and grown ups alike.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 November 2016

Humanity. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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