Friday, September 21, 2018

Melancholy Comments

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Richard Wlodarski
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Rebecca Navarre 22 September 2018

Beautifully and heart touchingly expressed! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Richard Wlodarski 23 September 2018

Rebecca, thank you so much for such an heart warming response.

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Mj Lemon 22 September 2018

Again, a fantastic work, Richard. I know Merton got inspiration from Dickinson. There is a hint of that inspiration in this verse.

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Richard Wlodarski 23 September 2018

M.J., thank you so much for believing it to be a fantastic work. And for the reference to Dickinson. Unlike my Kerouac book, I went cold turkey into this one. Firstly, drawing inspiration from his various works and writing my immediate response. And then, doing some research. Considering that The Seven Storey Mountain is rated as one of the Top 100 books of the century, my research will be stimulating.

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Carl Roussell 21 September 2018

Three excellent lines on sadness.

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Richard Wlodarski 23 September 2018

Greatly appreciated, Carl! They were a bit of a challenge to write.

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