Melody Of The Rain Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Melody Of The Rain

Rating: 5.0


Ancient friends appreciate
My ghost-like face
That has weathered loneliness
And the melody of the rain.

Spirits offer me the wine of dreams
When I fall asleep at dusk
With a tattered heart
I can no longer trust.

When I awake,
I hear the cry of the wind
Breathing upon weary chimes,

I know, I must abandon everything
And no longer consider
Anything as mine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 06 April 2008

Poets belong to the wind, the rain and the dusk. Your melody is playing time out of mind. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Will Barber 30 March 2008

The first stanza grabs the reader. The rest carries beyond. This is such a fine capture of a mood. Eloquent, and quite beautiful. Write on, Uriah. Your voice speaks volumes. I would compare this poem to Zen verse. Emptiness is, perhaps, the point of departure. This poem is profoundly wise, and sad. I think wisdom must always include sadness. - Will

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