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Mercy Damned

Rating: 5.0

Heard a sound in the distance
Enchanted by its sweetness
Vibrated my heart
Trembled my soul
Soothed my turmoiled being
The voice still echoes.

Visualized a formless image perfect
Painted a portrait ecstatic
Angel of mercy begotten

Hissed a warm breathing
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Fiona Davidson 28 November 2008

Beautiful words about a beautiful subject...thanks for sharing this...

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Herbert Nehrlich1 24 November 2008

Lots of good content but in my opinion it is being let down by the style you chose. Too rigid, lacking flow, staccato-like. I would revisit this in a different mood perhaps and let it flow on its own so to speak. Even the occasional rhyme would not be out of place here. H

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Brett Huyton 20 November 2008

'Dreamer and the dreamed united...' Full Kudos!

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Joseph Poewhit 18 November 2008

Poem expresses a lot of emotion with crying for understanding - kind of deep

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Tai Chi Italy 18 November 2008

Mercy Damned is a great title and your name, made me smile. The poem is superbly expressed and I would say, it is a damned good job you got this one out, because like Min says, the words were overwhelming for the reader so only god knows the release of the poet! Smiling at you, Tai, a firm believer in saying it like it is...

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Min Sia 18 November 2008

The words are overpowering! Mixed emotions flowing! And very mind provoking!

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