Midnight Call Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Midnight Call

Rating: 4.8


What does mid night knock mean?
Does that mean victory and over night win?
Love can’t be shown or reflected to be seen
Midnight invitation means yes and keen

Well these are means to express the desire
May be there many more ways to admire
Surely it is simple way to acknowledge
Straight forward approach to lay the seize

May be you are fond of intelligence
Wants to praise but not far from fence
Best way is to be off the guard and be caught
Half battle may be won without being sought

Surely out look and beauty form the essence?
Not to be measured by looking through lance
To be made known it is only from within
Trust may be reposed by layer only thin

No one would like hollow talk
Unnecessary talk with simple walk
Must prevail decisive at all the move
Amy misgivings directly remove

She may have some inkling to submit
May offer her hand or simply admit
Should she know your sincere efforts?
Must have like ways with good rapports

Other things may stand not in way
When you gather strength and simply say
I pledge to stand by and take you alone
Never to leave you…………………….

As we may be two wheels of chariot
Never at times I will act as idiot
What matters most is to be seen together
Resolve in mind to change the scene altogether

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pitilosi Mdala 14 October 2009

Other things may stand not way and resolve in mind the scene altogether

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Lady Grace 14 October 2009

'As we may be two wheels of chariot Never at times I will act as idiot What matters most is to be seen together Resolve in mind to change the scene altogether '.....................when it spins, it wins...my goshhhhhhhh, so hard to digest this piece my dearest friend..but as the title says''midnight call''..well maybe there is a reason why this call is made at midnight..naizz

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Catrina Heart 15 October 2009

Midnight knack is a victory maybe momentary or eternal, depends on the existance of both. Love speaks in a million ways, mysterious and unexplainable....Its a punch to the moon a wish to the star...love revolved from a distance.......great poem! ! !

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Sachin Goswami 15 October 2009

Love can’t be shown or reflected to be seen Midnight invitation means yes and keen

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Darshna Chopra 15 October 2009

What does mid night knock mean? Does that mean victory and over night win?

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Indira Renganathan 23 October 2009

As we may be two wheels of chariot Never at times I will act as idiot.....resolute words.....nice reading....thank you

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Umesh Lalvani 21 October 2009

Well these are means to express the desire May be there many more ways to admire Surely it is simple way to acknowledge

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Chetna Purohit 21 October 2009

What does mid night knock mean? Does that mean victory and over night win? Love can’t be shown or reflected to be seen

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Pami Panchal 21 October 2009

May be you are fond of intelligence Wants to praise but not far from fence

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Anand Madhukar 19 October 2009

A nice piece with some good thoughts.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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