Miss Fire 0052 Poem by Jonathan ROBIN

Miss Fire 0052

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'Fire right! go! " kilted keeper calls:
from flight no feathered pheasant falls.

"Fire left! " scared second keeper bawls:
from fright, unprepared peasant crawls!

(30 July 2009)

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"Fire right! " the kilted keeper calls:
from flight the feathered pheasant falls.

"Fire left! " the second keeper bawls:
from fright, a passing peasant crawls!

(23 March 1975)
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