Jonathan ROBIN

Freshman - 746 Points (22 September / London)

Miss Fire 0052 - Poem by Jonathan ROBIN

'Fire right! go! " kilted keeper calls:
from flight no feathered pheasant falls.

"Fire left! " scared second keeper bawls:
from fright, unprepared peasant crawls!

(30 July 2009)


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Initial Version

"Fire right! " the kilted keeper calls:
from flight the feathered pheasant falls.

"Fire left! " the second keeper bawls:
from fright, a passing peasant crawls!

(23 March 1975)

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 12, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, February 8, 2013


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