'Miss You' Poem by Menime Soul

'Miss You'

Rating: 5.0


If you’re gonna walk away tonight
Tell me what to do before you go
For I’m gonna go crazy all alone
Remembering our days full of fun

As I’m sitting now next to you
Looking back at the days full of your love and care
I wonder if things would ever remain the same
Wonder if life would ever be wonderful without you near

So many beautiful things I’ve learned from you
Learned how to keep my heart true
You see I keep trying to be a better man
For I always wanted to be like you

What you mean to me is so hard to verbalize
May be I’m not getting it all right tonight
All I wanna say is it’s not the right time to depart
For I still need you in my life

“Eyes shedding tears,
Heartbeat started to fade”
Don’t you say goodbye now
Don’t you close your eyes now Dad

For if you’re gonna walk away tonight
Tell me what to do before you go
For I’m gonna go crazy all alone
Remembering our days full of fun

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 27 November 2011

A very heart touching and deep write that really moved me so much since my father passed away a few months ago and I miss him everyday! I realize that he continues to live through me and the other children and new generations! Your father keeps living through you! Thank for sharing this well penned and poignant write! 10+++ Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Unwritten Soul 20 November 2011

Nothing can be replaced with care of a father :) , i love this poem as it show a strong love and how deep it for father...the way you write the emotion you deliver such a true feeling..i can feel it and it stimulating my nerves to smile..Wish the best for your father and you to always in love forever...Life is so full with him and Even in death the love still exist between both of you..Nice work my friend_Unwritten Soul

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