Mistake Poem by David Darbyshire

Mistake



Lee Wong was wrong
Blake made a mistake
Liu made a Boo-boo
Molly had her Folly

Confused? Dazed?
feeling stupid, lost
don't be crazed
not at any cost

To make a mistake
it is not the end of the world
To learn form your error
Will be quite an endeavor

Friday, June 9, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: confused
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 09 June 2006

If I'm not mistaken, this is a rather good read. Love Ernestine XXX

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Dee Daffodil 09 June 2006

Cute lil poem Dave...nice rhyme! Hugs, Dee

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Mia Ocean 09 June 2006

Nice poem. It has some good rhyming in it too. I like the beggining, its cute.

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Declan McHenry 09 June 2006

Tight piece Dave. You've developed your style.

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