David Darbyshire

Mistake

Lee Wong was wrong
Blake made a mistake
Liu made a Boo-boo
Molly had her Folly

Confused? Dazed?
feeling stupid, lost
don't be crazed
not at any cost

To make a mistake
it is not the end of the world
To learn form your error
Will be quite an endeavor

Poem Submitted: Friday, June 9, 2006

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  • Ernestine NorthoverErnestine Northover (6/9/2006 3:30:00 PM)

    If I'm not mistaken, this is a rather good read. Love Ernestine XXX

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  • Dee Daffodil (6/9/2006 12:15:00 PM)

    Cute lil poem Dave...nice rhyme!
    Hugs,
    Dee

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  • Mia Ocean (6/9/2006 6:00:00 AM)

    Nice poem. It has some good rhyming in it too. I like the beggining, its cute.

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  • Declan McHenry (6/9/2006 5:46:00 AM)

    Tight piece Dave. You've developed your style.

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