Misty Sunshine! Poem by Manjeshwari P MYSORE

Misty Sunshine!

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Amidst misty day, shines the warm Sun brightly
Just like a smile flashing amidst teary eyes
Sunshine and Dew always make things lovely
Beauty and Joy fill the lives just as the vast Skies.

Wednesday, November 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 05 November 2020

'a smile flashing amidst teary eyes' goes beautifully with the juxtaposition 'Sunshine and Dew always make things lovely' an imagery I have always adored

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Terry Craddock 16 November 2020

Mist Arises Dawn Born a misty veil hides black ink born world dawn shapes hidden obscured in mist mist veils hot orb eye of heaven dawn blinks wakes into warm warmer hot sun rays mist veils retreat fade into future dreams dawn mist dawn waiting for next birth dawn Inspired by the poem 'Misty Sunshine! ' by the poet Manjeshwari P MYSORE. Dedicated to the poet Manjeshwari P MYSORE.

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Terry Craddock 16 November 2020

A Misty Veil Hides Dawn mist arises dawn born a misty veil hides dawn black ink born world shapes hidden obscured in mist mist mist veils light creeps dances in dawn veils hot orb eye of heaven dawn blinks wakes into warm warmer hot sun rays mist veils retreat fades into future dreams dawn mists dawn waits dawn birth dawns Inspired by the poem 'Misty Sunshine! ' by the poet Manjeshwari P MYSORE. Dedicated to the poet Manjeshwari P MYSORE.

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Manjeshwari Poet 26 November 2020

well..Sorry I wasn't able to read some of your comments and poems..some problem with the websiteI guess.. well..I read ''Mona Lisa Ghost Smiles In Aerial Perspective'' and ''Misty Mona Lisa Personified Dawn''. So..it makes 8 poems dedicated to me....Thanks for the Honour..I am humbled and Honoured..

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Manjeshwari Poet 26 November 2020

my 4 lines Quatrain " Misty Sunshine " inspired you to write 8 poems.. " Mist Arises Dawn Born " .." A Misty Veil Hides Dawn " .." Shy Dawn Flirting Sun Courtship " .." Sun Flashing Bright Smile " .." Dawn Personified A Young Mother Mist Face " .." Mona Lisa Enigma Moon Faced " ..''Mona Lisa Ghost Smiles In Aerial Perspective'' and ''Misty Mona Lisa Personified Dawn''..incredible..

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Manjeshwari Poet 26 November 2020

would be more interesting if you could write one poem with all of it..like Da Vinci's Mona Lisa painting.position of the best in one..just a suggestion.. I also read the two lines written by you in the comment..Inspired by my poem Moonlight Pearls! ..Thanks :)

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Manjeshwari Poet 20 November 2020

Thanks for the Honour..I am humbled and honoured..I am happy that my Poem " Misty Sunshine " inspired you to write 6 poems.." Mist Arises Dawn Born " .." A Misty Veil Hides Dawn " .." Shy Dawn Flirting Sun Courtship " .." Sun Flashing Bright Smile " .." Dawn Personified A Young Mother Mist Face " .." Mona Lisa Enigma Moon Faced " ..6 poems inspired by a Quatrain..incredible.. Good..Thanks :)

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Terry Craddock 26 November 2020

The fun is in the writing :) I think you missed 'Mona Lisa Ghost Smiles In Aerial Perspective' and the complete extended version 'Misty Mona Lisa Personified Dawn'. mist can be inspirational, it leads to so many places, ties in with so many things

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Manjeshwari Poet 20 November 2020

Thanks for the Honour..I am humbled and honoured..I am happy that my Poem " Misty Sunshine " inspired you to write this poem and 5 more poems..6 poems inspired by a Quatrain..incredible..Good..Thanks :)

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Terry Craddock 26 November 2020

Your welcome, I am glad you enjoyed :)

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