Mockery Of Freedom…… (2) Poem by Amitava Sur

Mockery Of Freedom…… (2)

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Mockery of FREEDOM…… (2)
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The elected Leader
Is content and thinks
To become a dummy GOD! !

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While the electing mass
Remain the same distressed,
But the LEADER is
INVISIBLE now! ! !


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Amitava (6.10.2014) 10-00 am

Tuesday, October 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: politics
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 17 October 2014

Lovely poem. Wonderful tribute to leaders and voters......Loved the way you presented it... Sir, Thank you for encouraging comment for my poem. I am humbled.

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Roseann Shawiak 17 October 2014

Wow, Amitava! You could be talking about the U.S. in this poem, also. except Obama thinks to become a dummy king! We the people are distressed and our so-called leader is destroying our nation from the inside out. As a leader he is invisible, too! You are writing of India, and your poem parallels our country, amazing! ! This satire can be used for either! ! As it is written, you have done an excellent job like always. Great poem! Thank you, RoseAnn

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Akhtar Jawad 09 October 2014

What a lovely satire, true at least in Asian and African countries.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 08 October 2014

A fitting tribute to Indian voters and a rightly conceived image of Indian hypocrite leaders......very well composed .......Amitavaji

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Salini Nair 07 October 2014

Indian context................................tribute to all voters. and god leaders

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