Mockery of FREEDOM…… (2)
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The elected Leader
Is content and thinks
To become a dummy GOD! !
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While the electing mass
Remain the same distressed,
But the LEADER is
INVISIBLE now! ! !
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Amitava (6.10.2014) 10-00 am
Wow, Amitava! You could be talking about the U.S. in this poem, also. except Obama thinks to become a dummy king! We the people are distressed and our so-called leader is destroying our nation from the inside out. As a leader he is invisible, too! You are writing of India, and your poem parallels our country, amazing! ! This satire can be used for either! ! As it is written, you have done an excellent job like always. Great poem! Thank you, RoseAnn
What a lovely satire, true at least in Asian and African countries.
A fitting tribute to Indian voters and a rightly conceived image of Indian hypocrite leaders......very well composed .......Amitavaji
Indian context................................tribute to all voters. and god leaders
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely poem. Wonderful tribute to leaders and voters......Loved the way you presented it... Sir, Thank you for encouraging comment for my poem. I am humbled.