Modernist Perspective Poem by Paige Nielsen

Modernist Perspective

Rating: 5.0


The fear is absolute:
faces pale as the milk of death,
the inverse of the milk of human kindness.
A haunting sorrow binds the wounds,
enslaving us in its hollowest embrace.
This poem is a metaphor,
but I don’t know why.
I don’t know anything.
These days right is wrong and wrong is right.
Is this someone’s idea of a joke?
Well, buddy, I’m not laughing.
I’m retching in protest,
a one-girl revolution.
Can anybody save us now?
(I doubt it.)
We’re all chained by propriety
and blinded by society,
trading kisses for pennies
and chopping off our toes
(the latest fashion) .
This aftermath of civilization
pulverizes decency and honesty-
penalty box for you, dude,
sit out this round!
Hey now, don’t be like that.
Here, take some false eyelashes and a needle for your pain.
You feel dirty but mud isn’t dirt-
inside you’re squeaky clean.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melissa Nikolova 30 April 2009

I like this. It speaks to a world where narcissism is given the right to do what it will. “Trading kisses for pennies” is a beautiful line…

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Catina Crum 08 April 2009

Modernist Perspective, my dear. Thank you for the life you breathe into your words. This one is one of my topsies. 'You feel dirty but mud isn’t dirt- inside you’re squeaky clean.' Modernist perspective. I love this perspective. Mud can make you dirty but it isnt dirt. I like the parenthetical intergections, it seems to ad voice, even while possibly being a tad bit distracting, but it reminds me of a song.

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Sandra J. 01 April 2009

Wow...i actually really love this this is probably one of my favorite poems. Sandy J.

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