Moment Poem by Ala elouri

Moment

Rating: 5.0


The hard moment is when you act strong,

The moment where you laugh till you fall,

Even though deep inside of you someone beat you in the heart just like a basketball.

But the hardest feeling is to be with people yet feeling alone.

No one stopping there at your grief.

Feeling alone and hurt,

Feeling broken and broke.

The hardest feeling is to have nothing in the world to make you smile.

Nothing to make you handle the fall.

And No one to say: 'YOU ARE NOT ALONE.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 07 June 2016

Very intense, emotions flowing strongly throughout your poem, would love to read more of your poetry, please continue writing. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Ala elouri

Ala elouri

SanClemente, California
Close
Error Success