Monochrome View Poem by Barry Middleton

Monochrome View

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the river is high and muddy
the winter rains are falling
the delta fog is like the sea

the air this time of year
is wet and cold and dreary
the gray woods are silent

I pause at the top of the hill
I hear the scream of the mill
and the rumble of a train

the whistle of a wood duck
streaks past my hiding place
and memory lights a fire

I do not miss this dismal view
I miss its empty solitude
its comfort for somber moods

Monochrome View
Friday, February 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: fog,memory,sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 06 February 2017

A lovely presentation of solitude. A perfect atmosphere you have created. It's easy to fall into a nostalgic mood.

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Barry Middleton 06 February 2017

I would go back to those lonely childhood hills if I could. Thanks as always Nosheen.

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