Monster Inside Of Me Poem by Kylee Bartz

Monster Inside Of Me



There is a monster inside of me
Trying to take control of me
And succeeding

Lara is supposed to be my best friend
But as soon as she hates me
I want to hurt her.

The monster inside of me controls me
It makes me violent
Makes me want to kill her

The monster causes me to change
Never before have I wanted to punch Lara's face
Until she became mad at me

My apologies don't help
She gets madder and madder
The monster gets stronger and stronger

Eventually, I'll give in
I know I'll succumb to the evil
I'll succumb to the monster inside of me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Victoria Mbali 13 May 2010

i feel u, good writing

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Claude H Oliver Ii 04 June 2010

Honest and truthful. If we all admitted to our own monsters, there would be a little less tension in our daily lives.

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Robin Machorro 25 May 2010

this was very good very dark but in a good way you have a great talent

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Hans Vr 24 May 2010

Well written, Very honest and full of passion. We all have a little monster inside of us.(our ego) Sometimes it is really diffiuclt to control it and on and off it wins. I think all of us have been its little slave on and off But there is also a little angel (our soul) The more we learn to listen to the little angel the more we will turn our other cheek the better our lives will turn out to be.

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Gan Chennai 24 May 2010

Hey! This is simply Stupid. When someone hurts you, they are like in Fire. If you want to reciprocate the same, it is like fanning the Fire. Instead you should try to be passionate and loving towards her. It is like pouring water on Fire. It is simple logic which many don't understand. When someone shouts at you, you should immediately become cool. It is quenching fire with water. Never, Ever even be atrocious in poetic sense. No smoke without fire. Call yourself Kalm and Kool Kylee Bartz. You will become Calm and Cool. All the Best.

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Justina Haner 24 May 2010

i understand that completely

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Kylee Bartz

Kylee Bartz

Attica, New York
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