Moon's Goodbye Breeze Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Moon's Goodbye Breeze

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Tender dawn has come in crawling,
Plants raising branches with leaves,
All are offering their dawn worship,
Holy autumn morning is signalled.

Moon completing whole night duty,
Giving calm light in absence of sun,
Before sunrise this wants to leave,
New shift of duty will be done soon.

Like goodbye is given to wedded bride,
All are saying goodbye to lovely moon,
Moring water drops on leaves shine gently,
These are drops of tear of joy in goodbye.

Moon is smiling for a while and crying,
Like the crying bride still glows in light,
Although sorrow acquires separation,
Dazzling moon is going away from us.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,08 October 2017. All rights reserved.

Moon's Goodbye Breeze
Sunday, October 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,dawn ,goodbye,moon,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,08 October 2017. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Isabel Pimentel 05 October 2020

Moon says goodbye reflecting its beauty around us. Moon comes and goes. Moon sings and moon dances. Sometimes under cloud and sometimes under stars moon hides and sings. This poem is very nice.

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Pushpendra Patel 01 March 2019

Morning completes the duty. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 October 2018

A wonderful write on nature. Beautiful imaginative poem with superb imagery.10+++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 November 2017

A wonderful creation! ...Moon is smiling for a while and crying, Like the crying bride still glows in light..thanks a lot sir for sharing! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 November 2017

Moon is smiling! ! With the muse of nature! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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