The moon was full and the night was cool,
Windows were kept open, breaking the rule.
They lay in the bed with the curtains pulled aside
So they could see the full moon, smiling outside.
The world has many moon gazers, just as he.
Many of them I'm sure would be pleased to see,
The moon at full bloom, oh what a pleasant sight!
Some will write poems and some will go quiet.
Past midnight when the outside sky was alight,
Poured into their room the soft ambient light.
As traces fell on their faces, she dispensed with her pillow,
To rest on his outstretched arm, her moonlit face aglow.
They had some pillow talks, they had some fun.
And all acts of love were lovingly done.
Like birds they nestled under each others' wings,
And quietly fell asleep, amid their moonlight musings.
Dhaka
15 April 2014
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Like birds we nestled under each others' wings.. so beautiful!
Thank you, @Pradip Chattopadhyay, for reading the poem and appreciating it with a pertinent quotation. Much obliged.
You have a beautiful talent for painting pictures with your words and calling to light special moments or analogies. Lovely......
Thanks for your generous appraisal and praise, @Debra Robinson. Much obliged.
@ * Sunprincess * Thank you very much for loving my poem so much. I am so inspired! Much obliged.
@ Aqua Flower, I am greatly moved by your inspiring words. I cannot thank you enough for the way you've appreciated me.
@ Hira Ahsan, Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your kind words of appreciation here. I am inspired.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Like birds we nestled under each others' wings, And quietly fell asleep, amid our moonlight musings. This sums up the bliss of loving togetherness...! Watching the moonlit sky and lying in each other's warm embrace with no nagging thoughts to pester and slowly gliding into sweet slumber's domain in a mood of peaceful forgetfulness is heavenly.... Enjoyed this beautifully crafted rhyming write! !
Thank you so much, dear poet @Valsa George, for this generous appraisal of my humble effort. Your kind words inspired me a lot. I've been reading some of your limericks, which are truly par excellence!