Thursday, July 30, 2020

Moping On The Bay Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm sitting on the pier
just wishing you were here.
I have a broken heart;
why did we have to part?
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Belle Wassermeister
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Cowboy Ron Williams 11 April 2021

Another great poem with unusual rhyme scheme!

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Kim Barney 03 August 2020

A very nice poem, Missie! Unusual rhyme pattern: three stanzas of couplets and two of free verse! I am putting this on my favorites list!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 August 2020

A marvelous poem vividly depicting the many intricacies of love. A well crafted and conveyed write.

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Belle Wassermeister

Belle Wassermeister

Gleichen, Alberta, Canada
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