More You Go Away Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

More You Go Away

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More you go away
Saturday,13th October 2018

The more and more
I come near
and adore
and admire too

it is nature
that brings us together
removes fear
and distance remains far

I may miss
your absence
but there is the sentence
"more you go away less you feel anyway
"
we do more talking
as if you are walking
with steps echo reminding 
that you are also finding a rhythm

More You Go Away
Saturday, October 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 October 2018

we do more talking as if you are walking with steps echo reminding  that you are also finding a rhythm

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2018

I may miss your absence but there is the sentence more you go away less you feel anyway.....nice poetic expression. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.10

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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