Asiki Lucky


Morning - Poem by Asiki Lucky

The moment that unleashes the dawn of a new day,
Where every breathing thing begins to consider it way,
Sometimes she seems short or long,
But her beauty is that she always brings a new song.

Oh morning; the beauteous sister that awakens us from slumber,
Reminding us that the day has given us a new number,
To pray, stand, walk, run and fly,
Fly, fly, and fly beyond the uttermost sky.

Morning comes for every creature,
That all could feel the beauty of nature,
She welcomes you with a splash of cool air,
Then you will remember that life is a little bit fair.

Morning; a friend that fades away for some time,
But alas! Returns within a short time,
A good symbol of true friendship,
Just like the ocean is to a ship.

Though you may not utilize her to your own gain,
She still comes back for you again and again,
A princess that travels from a million mile,
Just to give you a ravishing smile.

Like a fan with three blades,
Chasing each other under the same shade,
Morning, man, and money,
Three of ‘em as sweet as honey.

Man lives today and tomorrow no more,
Money is a cloth you keep wishing you ever wore,
Morning never stays with you all day,
But she is always there for you to see each day.

Oh morning, I know you are somewhere very nigh,
May my morning wishes take me to a place so high,
Morning is a blessing in disguise
Truly, to those who are really wise.

Topic(s) of this poem: morning


Comments about Morning by Asiki Lucky

  • (11/4/2015 12:32:00 PM)


    wonderful poem............................ (Report) Reply

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  • C. P. Sharma (10/17/2015 5:23:00 AM)


    Good and refreshing penning. Keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Melvina Germain (10/6/2015 11:33:00 PM)


    Awww now this is refreshing as it share the beauty and tranquility of morning, that soothing time when you open your eyes and hear nothing but feel carressed by morning song in silence. Fantastic poem Asiki..... (Report) Reply

  • Patrick Bryan (9/25/2015 10:32:00 PM)


    Great Poem! I really enjoyed it (Report) Reply

  • (9/24/2015 1:23:00 AM)


    beautiful use of rhymes....... THanks for sharing Ashiki...... (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (9/22/2015 7:41:00 AM)


    Breathtaking write, with great rhythm and flow and inspired lines, thank you for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • G. Akanji Olaniyi (9/21/2015 8:13:00 AM)


    You are so lucky to be inspired into writing this piece of poem! tfs! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rachel Hill (9/20/2015 4:32:00 PM)


    Nice one.....keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • (9/20/2015 3:24:00 PM)


    Your 'Morning' is wonderful. Images are clear and inviting. Your
    use of words to depict ownership of your vision I espcially like. Your are a tour guide. With a desire for those along for the ride to enjoy every moment of your 'Morning' to experience. Nice work.
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/19/2015 12:00:00 PM)


    Morning comes for every creature; but, let prepare our lives with the muse of righteousness. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (9/19/2015 5:57:00 AM)


    A beautiful ode to the morning.
    Keep writing, you have talent
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  • Neela Nath Das (9/19/2015 5:03:00 AM)


    So beautiful poem on morning! Loved reading. (Report) Reply

  • Patrick Bryan (9/19/2015 1:23:00 AM)


    Nice poem! Good appreciation for something that is taken for granted every day.
    Thanks for sharing.
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  • Natasha Foster (9/18/2015 9:23:00 PM)


    What a beautiful poem! (Report) Reply

  • Elizabeth Padillo Olesen (9/17/2015 4:01:00 PM)


    It is very beautiful, Asiki. THe flow of language is very fine. IT is totally yours and original. The structure and form of your lines are great too. Understandable. You keep the head and you let the reader find the tail at the last lines. Take care and keep on posting. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (9/17/2015 1:30:00 PM)


    A lovely, well written ode to morning, Asiki (Report) Reply

  • Tony Adah (9/17/2015 12:17:00 PM)


    A good rendition about morning and things like it. It's lovely and perhaps lonely except man and money! Thx for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Leah Ayliffe (9/17/2015 11:43:00 AM)


    Such a lovely poem! There are many beautiful things to be found in the morning. (Report) Reply

  • Della Perry (9/17/2015 10:26:00 AM)


    i really enjoyed your poem. You are very good xx (Report) Reply

  • Liza Sudina (9/17/2015 10:01:00 AM)


    seems to me that you are lonely. and often speak with the sky.
    and there is only one I in your poem, closer to the end. i like such style. no egoism. good!
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 16, 2015



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