Rating: 5.0
The shocked stars'd hurriedly left the sky
And ashes of the elfin moon still remains
The startled sky'd turned a new sleeve
Replacing her dark blanket into a brilliant blue
Bemusing the sleepy sun from his lenghty nap

At first, she shyly opens her yellowish eyes
And then she stood and began her celestial duty;
Roaming about.
Friday, September 5, 2008
Chitra - 29 October 2009
a picturesque composition.. the play of shade and light
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Olugbenga Ayoola 05 April 2009
i really see all your effort is goog pls countinue without fed up you will get there, read my peom,
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Tolulope Akinwole 16 September 2008
you never cease to amaze me.10 for it.
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Sarwar Chowdhury 08 September 2008
...fine expression indeed.............10
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Marvin Brato 05 September 2008
That is good write, freshen my day! A 10.
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Sumita Datta 05 September 2008
hmm... not bad... liked it.. :)
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