Monday, February 12, 2018

Morning On The Seashore Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Sun lifted its head
From the ocean
Its rays shimmering
Over the blue water
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Ruta Mohapatra
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Nabakishore Dash 26 January 2022

The first and last stanzas are extremely write and mind blowing.100.

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 June 2018

Remnants of sea life That once contained little souls..............fine perception, thoughts, and conclusions. peace, tranquility, beauty........ thank u for this glorious morning on the seashore......... tony

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Lamar Cole 21 June 2018

Great poem about morning on the seashore.

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Chris Embrick 19 February 2018

Beautiful images of peace and tranquility. A respite for the soul. Thank you Ruta. 10

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Bipasha D 13 February 2018

You have presented soothing beautiful images. Well written, thanks for sharing

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 February 2018

A beautiful nature poem with vivid images.Well executed.10

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Marieta Maglas 12 February 2018

Wonderful poem, thank you for sharing.Voted 10.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 February 2018

An elegant piece of poetry! Very lucid expression....I find a liquid movement from the very first word to the last word! Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem with us....10

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