First feel not in reminiscence
But can feel aloud
It was there to hold all
Mother the phenomenon
Wrap that never bust
Wrestle to protect
But bang to restrict
Yet never revolt for freedom
March for all; but never asked to pay
Contract the wish yet conquer the world
Enormous form in the world
Mother the feel, the proud behind
First love that never ravage
Eternal vision that send to world
Landed before to carry the guest
Fold with love and care
Say good bye after the mission
Eternal phenomenon that continues…………
©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.
A woman is great because she is a mother and your beautiful poem is great as it is written on a mother..........10
a lovely poem about mother the most wonderful person on earth nice work
A mother is an unexplainable phenomenon and her love is irreplaceable! She is the very embodiment of love and care! A great tribute to a mother!
Mother is a topic on which the entire humanity is one. A great poem.
Hi Salini, A totally different take on the phenomenon of motherhood. First feel not in reminiscence But can feel aloud It was there to hold all Mother the phenomenon Mother is the Wrap never bust Who Wrestles to protect But bang to restrict, but the child never revolts for freedom And she never asks to pay' back for all the love and care she has rendered to her child. Yes, Mother is the feel that makes everyone proud and his/her First love. She does does not stay back to say good bye after the mission, but wishes to simply fade away. An Eternal phenomenon that continues………… Beautifully penned. Manifest of all the love and care enjoyed by the poet from her mother and may be, all the affection she has for her mother. Loved reading.
Mother, the eternal phenomenon that continues... a very fine ending for such a beautiful poem. love of the mother, and love for the mother. very nice poem thank you
These words are very beautiful. First love that never ravage Eternal vision that send to world
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A great tribute and great write on phenomenal mother.....Salini.....amazing write......Wish you a happy and prosperous new year 2015!