*****mother Goose Poem by Coach Roth

*****mother Goose

Rating: 3.0

Little Miss Muffet
sat on her muffin...
then she began to pray...
where oh where is my
little man Peter...
he has a wife
but cannot eat her...
so why doesn't he
come my way...

But Little Boy Blue
the Peter she knew,
and together they
plan to stay...
So Little Miss Muffet
has to tough it...
and look for another
to lay...

Emancipation Planz 07 July 2008

.. and there she found it in her own land of bran olay! me play, she says... hooray! ! ! !

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Rehab Helmy 10 August 2008

yummy sweet theme :)

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Ivan Donn Carswell 25 July 2008

Goosey, goosey gander, shall I wither or wander - better to trespass in nursery rhyme than suffer poetic doldrums any day! Rgds, Ivan

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Amber Lamb 07 July 2008

Hilarious! breathes fresh perspective into those old nursery rhyme characters!

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Onelia Avelar 07 July 2008

Fresh fresh :) humorous - (nature abhors the vacuum) the piece with many dots is open for lot of interpretations. The words are well sellected and provoke mostly pleasant emotions - little, miss, muffin, pray, little etc...

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Viola Grey 07 July 2008

oh man...I must have gotten the other book of nursery rhymes...very clever write indeed....excellent

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Coach Roth

Coach Roth

East Dubuque, IL
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