Mother You Are In Mind Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Mother You Are In Mind

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Oh my mother I am missing you,
Losing you in teenage in dew.
Although in old age I do think,
As stars to mother sun do link.

Your love rings your affection,
By your grace I am in perfection.
Correction of life speaks here,
This sure improves life's seer.

Oh mother, missing you is pain,
Truth of life is inked in rain.
Mother cloud leaves drop water,
Holds Earth mom feels the author.

Offering bless you live so far,
Many say you are now in sky star.
I know you show path I too feel,
In my mind you fill ever new zeal.

By your advice I do link to God,
Knowing him as eternal I do nod.
I do not know when I shall meet,
Oh mother eagerly I wish to greet.

Monday, October 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death,love,mother and child ,spiritual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Missing mother in teenage is painful. But Still child in old age remembers mother always and accepts her advice to link with God knowing him as eternal. A son wishes to meet his mother even in old age even after her death and likes to greet her. This is such a love and affection that a mother only knows. This poem is based on such theme. This is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Madathil Rajendran Nair 05 October 2015

Beautiful poem in fond memory of a departed mother. Thanks, Kumarmani Saab, for sharing the sweetness of your heart with us through this poem (10) .

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Daniel Brick 05 October 2015

The poem is deeply affecting. My own mother died two years just shy of 93 years old, so my twin sister and I enjoyed her presence for a precious ling time. But your poem reveals the depth and persistence of your filial love and your poet's eye sees her presence everywhere in the world. That's what I take away from your poem: a ever living presence.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 June 2016

In old age i do think of you. Nice dedication. Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 06 October 2015

A nice expression of love and gratitude to a mother missed....................10

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Sanjukta Nag 06 October 2015

A great poem sir on the eternal love bonding between mother and son. mother is the gift of God or may be God is in the avatar of mother on earth. I read your Odissi version of this poem Ma Apni Mon earlier, as I saw Bengali and Odissi alphabets are totally same but my bad luck I could not understand the language or meaning properly. Many thanks for the translation. Remarkable work.

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Liza Sudina 05 October 2015

Very tender poem of a loving son! hope you'll meet her there.

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Kelly Kurt 05 October 2015

I lost my mother 40 years ago as a teen. I often miss her still and wonder what it would have been like to have a mother as I aged. I do sometimes feel her presence (She gave me the love of writing) and I look forward to the chance of seeing her again. Thank you for your beautiful poem, Kumarmani.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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