Varsha Madhulika

Mould

I wish I had given her
My kind of observance
Towards all pleasant things
Towards all things I liked
Amulgamating all the positive
I wish I had instilled this kind of essence
Towards all pleasant things
Towards all things I liked
Conjoining the banks of river
With the water that kisses forever
Never abandoning even for once
Like salt to taste
And air to breath
And honey to health.

Life is all about living
Finding ways of achieving
Dreaming big as I can create
All because it's my life
All because it's my pleasure.

Topic(s) of this poem: thought

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 16, 2020

Form: Free Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This section is part of poem of Ravindra Kumar Soni Indifference. Though what he presented there is apt and very well brought forward, I tried to give a different look to it. Hope the poet doesn't mind. I named it mould because I feel we can mould with a good intentions and perspectives.
I wrote it with concept of a mould but when reviewed it again I felt like adding the refrain.
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  • M Asim NehalM Asim Nehal (9/16/2020 2:25:00 PM)

    Joy to read such poems.5 Stars
    Life is all about living
    Finding ways of achieving

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  • M Asim NehalM Asim Nehal (9/16/2020 5:02:00 AM)

    Under new rating system 5 stars for you for this wow poem

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  • M Asim NehalM Asim Nehal (9/16/2020 5:01:00 AM)

    Excellent poem nicely written.

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  • Deluke Muwanigwa (9/16/2020 4:48:00 AM)

    Its been moulded into nice poem. Well done

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  • Robert Murray SmithRobert Murray Smith (9/16/2020 3:10:00 AM)

    We serve our own interests in life. Expressive.

    Thank you for your kind comments.

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