The Open Door Poem by Varsha M

The Open Door

Rating: 4.8


Everything seems beautiful
Under the shade of hour glass.

Falling sand on hour glass
Encompasses every of my wish.

Explicit wish I wove
Materialized on time.


Right on the very time
I entered the open door.

Not always will the open door
Give me opportunity to enter.

Respect the time and opportunities
Which might not remain open for long.

Test of perseverance is tough
Elongating it breaks the bone.

Trusting on the unseen is toughest
Walking on this path is challenging.

The Open Door
Monday, August 3, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: door,perseverance
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Not always doors remains open. We should make out best efforts to make on time. It yields best happiness.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 05 August 2020

Open door signifies the opportunities available and one should grab them with both hands. Thoughtful poem. Congrats for being honored by PH.

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M Asim Nehal 05 August 2020

Nothing less than 10...

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me poet yeps poet 23 December 2020

UNLESS YOU POEMS GRADE THEY WLL REMAIN AS STAYED

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Terence Craddock 07 April 2023

P1 I came late to the door of the house of Varsha M not knowing if the hour glass was full or empty, time had swept me away like falling sands for a year and a half or more,

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Terence Craddock 20 January 2024

The poems 'Poet Poetic Paradise Flowers Fresh Watered' and 'The Dust Clothed Traveller' were inspired by this comment on the poem 'Wow Night Is Back...', by the poet Varsha M and dedicated to Varsha M.

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Terence Craddock 07 April 2023

P2 an afternoon sun was stretching time shadows upon silent footsteps as I laid poet's poetic paradise flowers fresh watered upon the threshold of a carved wooden door.

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Terence Craddock 12 April 2023

I wrote the poem 'I Came Late To The Door Of The House Of Varsha', inspired by the poem 'The Open Door', by the poet Varsha M and dedicated to Varsha.

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Susan Williams 25 April 2022

uh-oh, this poem was written 2 years ago.... I hope our poet is still a part of PH

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Craig Moses Uche 31 December 2021

nice read

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 October 2021

A profound poem that gives insight.Very perceptive lines that we need to ponder about. Revisiting this wonderful and brilliantly penned poem.

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