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The Open Door

Rating: 4.8

Everything seems beautiful
Under the shade of hour glass.

Falling sand on hour glass
Encompasses every of my wish.

Explicit wish I wove
Materialized on time.

Right on the very time
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The Open Door
Monday, August 3, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: door,perseverance
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Not always doors remains open. We should make out best efforts to make on time. It yields best happiness.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Li Su Pen 07 July 2021

Open doors they are so important in time! Thank you

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 June 2021

I totally agree with your first couplet... everything looks colourful if we put on coloured glass!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 April 2021

through colourful glass! A wonderful poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 April 2021

expressed how we perceive things

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 April 2021

You have very candidly

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Bharati Nayak 24 February 2021

An inspiring write! An open door may not give you opportunities --The road to success is challenging and one should be ready to face obstacles on the way!

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Rebecca Navarre 20 February 2021

Beautifully woven! .. Quite magical! .. Sometimes we may have the option of taking a leap of faith. Definite 5 Stars! ..++++++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 January 2021

The exclamation inadvertently used at the first sentence should be taken as a question mark. This is truly a great poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 January 2021

Have I read this wonderful poem before! Everything looks beautiful when you see it through colourful glass... invited me

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Unwritten Soul 19 January 2021

Refreshing and a wonderful self reflection. Line and line flows beautifully. ??

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