Mountain Religion Poem by Parivallal Swamy
Mountain Religion
Mountain Religion
I kept climbing till my ego got smaller,
Yet, my march is on, and here i am,
Still below you, the mountain, quite,
I've become, as I've begun to realise,
Like everyone tries to portray, I've,
Unknowingly become one of them,
Showing others, can't make you happy......
Still below you, I can never be you,
Hey mountain, your humbleness explains,
I'm partly happy, for I could sense you,
I'm partly not, for I might not follow,
I'm afraid, not to let go off the control,
And let ego portray my image and not thyself,
Maybe I should see you often, the mountain,
To remind to be humble when you stand tall............
It carries a sublime philosophy of life for all to emulate. Thanks. I quote: Maybe I should see you often, the mountain, To remind to be humble when you stand tall.
Thank you my friend for your comment. Believe me friend, I had written it on a trip to hill station. If you watch the mountain little thoughtfully, you will become more humble in life. :)
kept climbing till my ego got smaller, Yet, my march is on, and here i am, Still below you, the mountain, quite, I've become, as I've begun to realise, Like everyone tries to portray, I've, Unknowingly become one of them, Showing others, can't make you happy......A wonderfulpoem.
Thank you Bharati... I ve realised that I got a thumbs up comment from a poet herself. I am glad that you liked my poem. I ve started reading your's and find your poem's carry a deeper meaning in its simplistic style :) Thanks again fellow poet :)
Thank you :) I found this place a platform to express myself. I am happy to see your appreciations. Thanks again :)
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Maybe I should see you often, the mountain, To remind to be humble when you stand tall............ - - - - - - -I am visiting this poem again and still wonder at its beauty and wisdom.To my poem list.
Thank you bharathi ji :) I am pleased to post my poems in the site. The site is really my best find yet since it gave access to read some wonderful poems and interact with poets :)