Moving On Poem by Margarita Cortés

Moving On

Rating: 4.3


Why do we pretend neither of us hurts?

All this hopelessness,

Let's not make it worse!

Nothing left to gain,

Nothing except pain.

Copyright © Margarita Cortes - All rights reserved

Wednesday, June 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: letting go
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Savage 02 January 2016

Profound short and to the point. Reality of reality. Great poem. #10.

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Thank you Howard. Its short but full of real emotion.

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Athanasius Okowa 31 August 2015

've always liked them short ...

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Thank you Athanasius Okowa!

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Lorraine Colon 05 June 2015

Letting go of someone we love (or once loved) is difficult. Love always leaves footprints on our hearts. Very nice poem, well expressed.

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Thank you Lorraine Colon and God Bless!

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