Mr Wonderful (New Version) Poem by Hazel Durham

Mr Wonderful (New Version)

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The empty void is banished, she's invited into a serene dreamland,
Where she unites with her Mr Wonderful,
They sway to the beautiful sound of her devoted dream-band,
She is resolute to be part of the sunlight,

To surf on the waves of her courage and escape to New York,
In her homeland she fights to survive the darkness of each lone night,
A black drape casting its sombre mood as she longs for the light
Of the day, to immerse her wandering mind to find an exciting way,

Central Park is holding its arm outstretched from the depth of its soil
To embrace, charm and uplift her to the dizzying heights soon,
Like diving into a warm blue lagoon,
She dreams she wakes up to millions of city lights,

To nurture and comfort her in the Big Apple's might,
Yvonne and her beloved mum lives in a village in East Clare,
They pick bog cotton in its wild grasslands,
With their artistic flair

They gather a soft and pure appeal with their loving hands
To give style to their old rented farmhouse,
She dresses in summer and spring colours to uplift winter's land,
She feels an emptiness like her soul has gone missing

And she is desperately wishing
To run away from her internal ache,
She has untamed flame coloured hair wild and awake,
Green cat eyes fully made up,

She flies to New York to lights and action,
A postman knocks on her apartment door,
With a shining smile in his chocolate brown eyes
That makes her fears disappear,

Ray is tall, so good looking and her eyes fill with a tear,
Movement of her deep emotions cascade into a waterfall of good cheer,
His love is serenading her here,
Life is now two heartbeats in a cocoon,

She has discovered a calming lull,
Since she has met her Mr Wonderful.

Thursday, May 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I have rewritten this poem again to improve it and to add more creativity! It is about my beautiful friend Yvonne and her handsome husband Ray.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 15 December 2019

TWO HEARTBEATS IN A COCCOON- - a memorable phrase. This woman has been preparing herself for a meaningful relationship. She is loyal to her future beau even before she meets him, if that is possible. And when she sees him, she knows... Love does find a way.

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Mahtab Bangalee 16 October 2019

Life the journey of dream (mixed of illusion and reality) truth- a delusional power! in love the life is flying to goalless destination WONDERFULNESS standing by the side of all crossing welcome on crisscross breathing

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Bri Edwards 11 August 2019

" Ray" it must be a typo. Surely you meant " Bri" ! ! ! ? favorite lines: " To run away from her internal ache, She has untamed flame coloured hair wild and awake, " ....though i'd put a hyphen in " coloured-hair" . of course i'm American, so i CAN. bri :)

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Valsa George 06 May 2019

In her homeland she fights to survive the darkness of each lone night, A black drape casting its sombre mood as she longs for the light Lovely lines on some one who endures to come out of the night of darkness to daylight. A remarkable poem on how life changes when one finds a beautiful partner for one's life! Love has a magic and this magic is powerfully transferred through beautiful verse!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 May 2019

A fascinating expression has been made astutely.. This is really a beautiful poem and It is a great tribute to your friend Yvonne and her husband Ray. The last six lines are much impressive. Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem.

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