Monday, August 29, 2005

Music! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Playing music is such fun,
Espcialy when your in the sun!
Bruce and the E-street band,
Really make a lovely sound,
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Katie Swan
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Kathleen Paul-Flanagan 31 August 2005

Bruce and The E-Street band...You had me smiling again. Used to love Bruce when I was a kid. You've got a few typos but no big deal. Just run a spell check before you post. :)

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Kelly Allen Vinal 30 August 2005

Another great poem, Katie! And you love great music!

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Shelia Williams 30 August 2005

I can really relate to this one. I am a music lover myself

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sheila knowles 30 August 2005

Yay Katie...I'm soooooo proud of you :))

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Herbert Nehrlich1 29 August 2005

I agree with Mary and Uriah but must add that the talent lurking behind that innocent face needs to be complemented by attention to (spelling) detail. I liked the ambience of the poem. And I like music. H

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Uriah Hamilton 29 August 2005

Hey Katie, I'm with you about digging the music, keeping writing the poetry also!

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Mary Nagy 29 August 2005

Very nice Katie. You have some nice poetry here for someone of such a young age. Keep up the writing and we can expect many great things. Sincerely, Mary

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