Playing music is such fun,
Espcialy when your in the sun!
Bruce and the E-street band,
Really make a lovely sound,
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I agree with Mary and Uriah but must add that the talent lurking behind that innocent face needs to be complemented by attention to (spelling) detail. I liked the ambience of the poem. And I like music. H
Hey Katie, I'm with you about digging the music, keeping writing the poetry also!
Very nice Katie. You have some nice poetry here for someone of such a young age. Keep up the writing and we can expect many great things. Sincerely, Mary
Bruce and The E-Street band...You had me smiling again. Used to love Bruce when I was a kid. You've got a few typos but no big deal. Just run a spell check before you post. :)