Mutables Poem by Sathya Narayana

a wonderful allegory depicting the life cycle...in such endearing n tender words.

Good, though again, quite conservative. Yes, the rose is intelligent enough to accept its mortality and can appreciate fully its brief existence. Fine presentation.

A beautiful elegy to the rose. Earth is diminished by the death of even one flower.10/10 Best regards, Sandra

This poem has a lot of depth, I agree with Mamta...you draw a comparison between the short life span of the flower that will be cut and the transient life that we lead...a very meaningful and thought-provoking piece too.

let me feel good and content the momemts i exist everything changes form- my mutable life will wilt. you talk of impermanence andtransitory nature of things. there are many layers of meaning i can sense here, look at the whole cosmos, and you realise your insignificanmce or a design in your presence... Sathya. very well written poem