My Aching Heart Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

My Aching Heart

Rating: 5.0


Oh! my aching heart
Has left nothing to disclose
To the bitter breeze
Moist, from the seas and waves
Sweetness of your breath.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 07 March 2022

A wonderful poem Unniji! Appreciated and admired. Thanks for sharing......5 stars.

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 March 2022

Again, feels so great to receive your comments, the first for this poem.

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 March 2022

This is my second attempt at Tanka. I am not very sure it is really a Tanka. But thank you very much, for being the first person to read it. And for marking your appreciation, Dilipji. Wonderful comments. Heartening! ! !

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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