My Angel Star Poem by Lorena Lalen Cruz

My Angel Star



All has been unfamiliar
Since the harsh silent war
All that's left is a permanent scar
Left by my angel star

Yes, it's been a brutal fight
Gave me the worst possible sight
The traces of my angel's flight
Made my life just black and white

I can't take this anymore
I can feel it straight to the core
My tears might just soon pour
For I saw angel star soar

The sight I see now is just blurry
Can anyone open my eyes to see
Coz' all I see is agony
And my soul's bursting vanity

All that's left in me is confussion
And the need of the explanation
Why am I here in this location
Away from my angel star's protection

Now I'm left here unprotected
My life now I guess just shifted
To a place where I shouldn't be located
For this is where the war ended

See how things are unfamiliar
Reminding me the brutality of war
It gave me the most cruel scar
For it pushed away my angel star

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julia Pascual 05 August 2009

a sad poem... but maybe you just can't see your angel star.. but it'll continue to shine on you.. and guiding you always... have faith...

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Nashy Lamen 02 August 2009

Very Sad, .. I think I know who your angel star is.. Continue expressing such emotion...

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