Vishal Sharma

Gold Star - 5,400 Points (India)

My Bullet Of Love - Poem by Vishal Sharma

I wept with an eye of an untold story
for the person who never ever existed
my gun of love with the bullet of passion
was fired right aiming at her heart
but alas i forgot she was the soul
the bullet passed undeflected...! !

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Acrostic


Comments about My Bullet Of Love by Vishal Sharma

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/3/2015 1:57:00 AM)


    Superb! ! ! ! ! ! The missed shot at soul is sure to reach heart.10 (Report) Reply

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  • Sanjukta Nag (11/5/2015 5:59:00 AM)


    Wow this is really a remarkable concept and portrayed it craftily. Great work V. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 4, 2015



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