Luwi Habte

Rookie (19 march / Asmara)

My Choclate - Poem by Luwi Habte

My sweet chocolate which I own it sudden
I am scared that it might be finished soon
Because its taste is pretty secreted on

You are so delicious which gives happiness to my soul
Rather than me, even other people are said so
They keep on telling that you are so sweet of all

I will take good care of you my chocolate
Because you are the one as sweet as honey more
You are the best from the stuffs created on

A lot of are trying to eat my chocolate
And some are asking to let them know your taste
But how it can be? Let they don’t think of it
I am really sorry for them but I am the owner of my chocolate! ! !

My sweet chocolate!

Comments about My Choclate by Luwi Habte

  • Mubeen Sadhika (9/2/2009 12:40:00 AM)

    Innocent feeling is really captured very nicely. Good to read. deserves 10+ (Report)Reply

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  • (5/20/2009 1:59:00 PM)

    Decadent chocolate..yet the importance of guarding that which is precious rings clear here (Report)Reply

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  • (5/17/2009 2:26:00 PM)

    hi Luwi-
    chocolate is my secret addiction- I drink it eat it, touch it with pleasure 8+......''
    read my blog at


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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 12, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, September 25, 2009

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