Luwi Habte

Rookie (19 march / Asmara)

Weird - Poem by Luwi Habte

While people walks to the right
Weirdo runs to the left side

While people inters in
Weirdo gets out for nothing

While people get sleep well
Weirdo stays awaken and face the hell

While people dance and enjoy their time pretty cool
Weirdo gets sad alone in a dark hole

While people survive happily and safely
Weirdo wishes to die only

While people ends a meeting
Weirdo starts from the beginning

The amazing thing is incredibly
That weirdo is so lovely
And hell ignominiously
Because it is impetuously

Weird...lol


Comments about Weird by Luwi Habte

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/19/2009 11:07:00 AM)

    The amazing thing is incredibly
    That weirdo is so lovely
    And hell ignominiously
    Because it is impetuously......acting on different directions and just opposite... beautiful poem... i liked it....10
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  • Jacqui Thewless (9/18/2009 2:45:00 PM)

    Really strong rythyms. Keep it strong, girl. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/17/2009 10:12:00 AM)

    weirdo a very different person which is what i prefer
    when they go right weirdo goes left......it shows that that person wants to foloow his/her own path great job love the theme
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  • Ravi Sathasivam (9/16/2009 1:57:00 AM)

    Great.
    Wonderful poem.
    Well penned
    Enjoyed reading it
    Thanks
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  • (9/7/2009 8:40:00 PM)

    Very well expressed Luwi....your poetic talent shines through with this....well done my friend 10 (Report)Reply

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  • James Mclain (9/7/2009 12:16:00 PM)

    and bold loves the lion..
    and walks with..
    and sleeps under..
    a nobles door....iip
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  • (9/6/2009 8:45:00 AM)

    an amazing poem. it shows opposition to every move and the need to overcome it.welldone.
    voted10
    surya
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  • (9/6/2009 8:09:00 AM)

    What a weirdo, who wants to do the opposite of what others are doing. Interesting piece. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/5/2009 1:40:00 PM)

    This is very good poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Ravi A (9/5/2009 11:43:00 AM)

    To stay out of tune with the world - this is only a relative aspect. In our eyes he may a weirdo but from his own point of view, he may be just another person. What is to be seen is that whether he is a headache for the society as an anti social element. Otherwise, let him have his strange behaviour. Doesn't matter. (Report)Reply

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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (9/5/2009 11:31:00 AM)

    very good and well penned (Report)Reply

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  • (9/5/2009 9:07:00 AM)

    a nice write! interesting way of explaining...that how the ugly/bad/weirdo differs from the rest. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/5/2009 3:58:00 AM)

    lovely and wonderful poem it's really great...........but who is wierdo? (Report)Reply

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  • Ency Bearis (9/5/2009 2:11:00 AM)

    good write.......nice cognizants and presented well the comparison of each....10 (Report)Reply

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  • Mubeen Sadhika (9/5/2009 1:33:00 AM)

    The binary opposition is so clearly discussed. Nice to read. deserves 10++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Rajaram Ramachandran (9/4/2009 7:26:00 PM)

    What a contrast between a normal person and a weirdo, which is brought in here very nicely. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 4, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 14, 2011


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