Weird Poem by Luwi Habte


Rating: 4.4

While people walks to the right
Weirdo runs to the left side

While people inters in
Weirdo gets out for nothing

While people get sleep well
Weirdo stays awaken and face the hell

While people dance and enjoy their time pretty cool
Weirdo gets sad alone in a dark hole

While people survive happily and safely
Weirdo wishes to die only

While people ends a meeting
Weirdo starts from the beginning

The amazing thing is incredibly
That weirdo is so lovely
And hell ignominiously
Because it is impetuously

Rajaram Ramachandran 04 September 2009

What a contrast between a normal person and a weirdo, which is brought in here very nicely.

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Mubeen Sadhika 05 September 2009

The binary opposition is so clearly discussed. Nice to read. deserves 10++++

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Ency Bearis 05 September 2009

good write.......nice cognizants and presented well the comparison of each....10

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Omar Ibrahim 05 September 2009

lovely and wonderful poem it's really great...........but who is wierdo?

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Deependra Kumar Jha 05 September 2009

a nice write! interesting way of explaining...that how the ugly/bad/weirdo differs from the rest.

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Jacqui Thewless 18 September 2009

Really strong rythyms. Keep it strong, girl.

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Elena Winters 17 September 2009

weirdo a very different person which is what i prefer when they go right weirdo goes shows that that person wants to foloow his/her own path great job love the theme

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Ravi Sathasivam 16 September 2009

Great. Wonderful poem. Well penned Enjoyed reading it Thanks

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~ Jon London ~ 07 September 2009

Very well expressed Luwi....your poetic talent shines through with this....well done my friend 10

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James Mclain 07 September 2009

and bold loves the lion.. and walks with.. and sleeps under.. a nobles door....iip

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